A Narrow Escape
You know… there is nothing as tempting as a locked door. It was on Wednesday, after school, the year 2209; I was riding home on my quadcraft and saw a building that had strangely never been there before. To build a building this size, it would take at least 12 hours and it hadn’t been there when I went to school in the morning. I can’t tell you the location of the building because no one must go through what I went through. I went to the door and found out that it was locked. Whoever put the building here must have something to hide. I could barely contain my excitement and decided immediately to explore and solve the mystery behind the building. I thought about using the password retriever that my best friend Fredbot#254698 had given me yesterday. I tried to get the password but the door was locked with a firewall. _ _ _ _!
I had to go home and get the firewall blaster upgraded. But the upgrade was 8965645456465742654654 GB! That would take about 3 hours, maybe even 4. I had to wait until the next day; it was getting late at night but I couldn’t go to sleep because I kept on thinking about the building.
I told my mom I was going to a friend’s house and that I would come back really late so she wouldn’t have to worry about where I was. I went to school but didn’t tell anyone about my new firewall blaster and what I was going to do with it. After school I sped to the building on my quadcraft. I had also downloaded the speeder1425 on to it. I reached the building and got the password. I can’t tell what that was either, for the same reason that I can’t tell you the location. I went inside and found an empty room. It was pretty boring so I decided to see if I could find a more amusing room. I went to all the floors and found nothing, but when I got to the top floor it was like an advanced room from another planet. Just when I got lost in this new world, the whole room started to shake! I ran for the door as if my butt was on fire, but it wasn’t there any more. Suddenly something hit me in the head and I became unconscious.
I woke up in a bedroom. What? I didn’t get what had just happened. So I just got out of the bed and went outside. “AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!” This wasn’t my house! I was definitely somewhere else! I had some sort of black metallic bracelet on my wrist. It had some markings on it in bright red. Suddenly I heard footsteps, no ordinary footsteps, they sounded bigger, much bigger. I turned around just in time to see a distorted figure before being knocked unconscious again. What is with this place and unconsciousness?
I woke up in a chamber with many other uhh… whatever they were. I soon found out that I was actually an intergalactic gladiator. _ _ _ _! I can’t be here, I didn’t tell my mom I would be back in a few weeks, I had said in the night! An announcer said on the speakers that I was to have a match with a guy named Poc578t0. He was a great fighter but was very slow, so I was able to beat him, but I barely survived. If it wasn’t for my firewall buster I would have never destroyed his system.
I had several other matches and each match made me stronger and faster. After my 13th kill, I got fed up, this was getting too annoying and I hated seeing someone, no, actually, something, dying in my hands. Plus I was injured all over my body. I decided to get everyone, everything, to help in escaping from this place. They all finally agreed, but the problem was, the spaceships were being guarded by the guards. We came up with a plan to defeat them. We were gonna attack at uhh… in a while. When we attacked, the weaker ones amongst us created a diversion, and while the guards were distracted, the stronger ones beat ‘em up. I was one of the strong ones
. We got into the escape pods and set the coordinates to our home planets.
When I got back to earth, the building wasn’t there anymore, and only 15 minutes had passed. I went back to my house and my mom asked me why I was home so early. I replied that my friend was not at home.




strange! Good Job!
lil’dude!!lyked ur story!
wish i was there with you while fighting botz and alienz..lolz!!
kewl story!:)
ooo..u chngd it..dis 1s better..kep it up!..cya later!
Nice abdullah, i just somehow really liked it…NO…I LOVE IT!!!